I am trying to tweak chapter 6 to be more intriguing. I just can’t seem to find the right set of spices for this chapter. There could be a hint of romance but much more is not possible. My MC’s are off getting fake id’s made, kinda dry I know. The fake id’s have been an integral part of 3 conversations and many things hinge on these id’s I feel the need to include it.
as I write this I am getting a few spice ideas.
Well I know you don’t come here to listen to me gripe but I think typing a few comments to my followers may have stirred a few ideas.
I thank you for that.